Feedback on “Calligraphy from the Inbetween,” by Son of Saturn and Featuring Bleeding Heart Bliss

I originally posted the following video and commentary onto my Facebook wall…

Son of Saturn – “Calligraphy From The Inbetween” Ft. Bliss (The Blackhole Speakeasy):

My CommentaryBleeding Heart Bliss, blazing through the beat! Conscious Hip-Hop Lyricists, FTW!

A Second Round of Feedback on My Poem, “The Slave-State of Corporate Capitalism”

The following correspondence originally took place on my Facebook wall, upon my poem, “The Slave-State of Corporate Capitalism“…

(continuation of a first discussion, which took place here)

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Rayn: I’ve witnessed the underclass and understood its necessary permanence in a capitalistic world where commercialism and technology are the new imperialisms, and the race to manufacture and sell has caused America to declare a war on poverty and ignorance, and punish those assumed guilty with life-sentences of servitude to dead-end jobs that trickle down minimum wages and allow the rich to get richer, while the rest get deceived into thinking that they, too, can one day become the next John D. Rockefeller, yet, never do, because the fruits of labor have been replaced with high-tech paper, suitable to be used for the purchase of the same illusions of necessity and convenience that they’ve spent their work day creating…

Keith M.: Thank you!

Rayn: You’re most welcome!

Thomas Pr.: There is this guy James at work. He graduated Duke on Scholarship. He works for me. I tell him how it is with the back of my hand upside his head.

AtLas’: Truth… Love it

Discussing “The Last Winter,” by “Figure of Speech”

The following correspondence originally took place upon my Facebook wall…

Shinji M.: hey, how’s it going? thanks for tracking me down… i’m working on an EP right now… 🙂 if you have some time to kill, check me out in this video… it’s from a show i had in Singapore:

The Last Winter (Spoken Word Version) – Figure of Speech:

Rayn: Wow! Very powerful! Once again, I’m impressed!

Shinji M.: aw, thanks man! 😀